Essay plan: opinion (agree or disagree)
A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.
The question
Globalisation is causing many local cultures and traditions to disappear. What are the causes of this, and what can be done to protect local culture?
Your 4-paragraph plan
- Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
- Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
- Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
- Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.
The trap in this question type
Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.
Model answer for this question
Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.
The same films, brands and slang now circle the planet in days, and many local traditions are quietly going out of business. This essay considers why globalisation erodes local culture and what can realistically be done to protect it.
The causes operate through economics and attention. Global entertainment arrives with budgets no village festival can match, so young people grow fluent in imported culture while their grandparents' songs go unrecorded. Trade does similar work on objects: mass-produced clothing undercuts local weavers until the craft survives only in museums. Language sits beneath it all, since careers increasingly reward English or Mandarin, and every child who drops a mother tongue closes a library of stories, proverbs and ways of seeing.
Protection, however, is possible without pretending the world can be un-connected. First, culture survives where it pays: governments and consumers who fund local film, fashion and music turn heritage into livelihoods, as Nollywood and Afrobeats prove on a global scale. Second, schools can teach local languages and history alongside global skills rather than instead of them, producing citizens fluent in both worlds. Third, the same platforms that spread global culture can carry culture outward; a folk musician with a phone now has an audience her grandmother could not have imagined.
In conclusion, globalisation starves local culture of money and attention, but the response is not isolation. Cultures that are funded, taught and broadcast do more than survive contact with the world; they join it on their own terms.
Why this answer scores
- Causes are organised by mechanism (economics, attention, language), not listed randomly.
- Solutions are realistic and match each cause, with Afrobeats as living proof.
- The closing phrase 'join it on their own terms' resolves the essay with confidence.