Essay plan: opinion (agree or disagree)
A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.
The question
Some people believe students should only study subjects that will help them get a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Your 4-paragraph plan
- Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
- Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
- Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
- Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.
The trap in this question type
Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.
Model answer for this question
Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.
Should a student touch nothing but the subjects that lead to employment? I disagree with this view to a large extent: careers are the reason we can afford a life, but education exists to prepare the whole of that life, and even the careers argument collapses on inspection.
The employment-first position is not foolish. Education is expensive, competition is harsh, and for a family investing its savings in a degree, employability is not a detail. Courses with no thought for the labour market can strand graduates in unemployment with elegant but unsellable knowledge.
The first problem is that nobody can name tomorrow's job subjects. Technology is already automating tasks inside accounting, law and medicine, while creating work in fields that did not exist a decade ago. The workers who adapt are those trained to learn, reason and write clearly, capacities built by history's arguments, literature's empathy and philosophy's logic as much as by any vocational course. Second, society needs more from its citizens than output: voters who can detect a lie, parents who can tell a story, neighbours who understand where their laws came from. A country of pure specialists is cheaper to fool and poorer to live in.
The sensible design is therefore a core of career-relevant training wrapped in genuine breadth. Students should graduate able to earn a living and able to question what the living is for. Education that aims only at the first produces employees; education that aims at both produces adults.
Why this answer scores
- The extent of disagreement is stated and defended, not left vague.
- The strongest opposing point (cost and employability) is granted its full weight first.
- The last line's employees/adults contrast is the kind of controlled flourish band 9 rewards.