Essay plan: opinion (agree or disagree)

A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.

The question

In many countries, more and more young people are leaving rural areas to live in cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what problems does it create?

Your 4-paragraph plan

  1. Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
  2. Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
  3. Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
  4. Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.

The trap in this question type

Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.

Model answer for this question

Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.

In many developing countries, villages are emptying as young people board buses for the city. This essay examines why the drift happens and the difficulties it creates on both ends of the journey. The causes are mostly economic. Farming incomes are unpredictable and often insulting for the hours worked, while cities promise salaried jobs, faster internet and the possibility of a different life. Education pulls in the same direction: the best universities, and the internships that follow them, are almost always urban. There is a social engine too, since every successful cousin who returns for the holidays with a smartphone and new clothes quietly recruits the next wave of migrants. The problems, however, land on both ends of the road. Cities strain under the arrival of thousands of newcomers each week: rents climb, traffic thickens, and informal settlements spread because housing cannot keep pace. Many migrants end up underemployed, riding motorcycle taxis with certificates in their bags. Meanwhile the villages lose exactly the people they need most, leaving farms in the hands of the elderly and shrinking the local market for every trader who stays. Food production suffers, and the countryside ages. In summary, young people leave because opportunity is concentrated in cities, and their departure overloads urban services while draining rural communities of energy and labour. Until decent jobs and schools exist outside the big cities, the buses will remain full.

Why this answer scores

  1. A causes-and-problems question needs both halves answered fully; each gets a dedicated paragraph.
  2. Cohesion comes from the extended journey image (buses, road, ends) rather than mechanical linkers.
  3. Effects are traced on both sides, cities and villages, which shows the examiner developed thinking.

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