Essay plan: opinion (agree or disagree)
A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.
The question
Advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Your 4-paragraph plan
- Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
- Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
- Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
- Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.
The trap in this question type
Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.
Model answer for this question
Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.
Advertisers spend billions speaking directly to children, and many countries now debate whether that conversation should be cut off entirely. I largely agree that advertising aimed at children should be banned, because it exploits an audience that cannot defend itself, though the ban must be defined carefully to work.
The core argument is about fairness. Advertising is a contest between a persuader and a sceptic, and adults at least arrive armed with scepticism. Young children do not: research consistently shows they struggle to distinguish programmes from commercials or to recognise persuasive intent. Marketing sugary cereal or plastic toys to them is therefore not persuasion but manipulation of the defenceless, and the results show in childhood obesity statistics and in family conflict, as parents absorb the pressure of engineered pestering.
Opponents raise two objections: that parents, not governments, should filter what children want, and that bans threaten the advertising revenue that funds children's media. The first underestimates the battlefield, since no parent can referee thousands of advertisements a year embedded in apps, videos and games. The second is answerable with design: Norway and Quebec restrict child-directed advertising, and children's programming survives there through licensing and public funding.
I would therefore ban advertising targeted at children under twelve, while allowing family products to be marketed to the adults who actually hold the wallet. Societies restrict what can be sold to children; it is consistent to restrict how childhood attention is sold to advertisers.
Why this answer scores
- 'To what extent' is answered precisely: a ban under twelve, with adult-directed marketing untouched.
- Counterarguments are named and dismantled rather than ignored.
- The final sentence lands a principled parallel that examiners remember.