Is it better to buy a few expensive things or many cheap ones?

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Is it better to buy a few expensive things that last, or many cheaper ones? Give your opinion with reasons and examples.

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I buy few things and pay more for them, though I learned this the expensive way. In two years I bought four pairs of cheap shoes at about fifteen dollars each, and every pair failed before the rainy season ended. The boots I finally saved for cost ninety and are now in their fifth year. The arithmetic is obvious in hindsight, but the real cost was the time lost shopping again and again. I make two exceptions. Things that change fast, like a child's clothes or a phone I will replace anyway, do not deserve premium prices. Where quality lasts and use is daily, buying once is cheaper than buying often.

Why this answer earns score 160

Concrete numbers make the argument vivid and specific in very few words.
The exceptions show judgement rather than a rule applied blindly.
Clear position in the first sentence, restated as a principle at the end.

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