Onterra TutorDescribe a time you changed your mind about something important.
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The question
Describe a time you changed your mind about something important. What made you change it?
Score 160 model answer
I used to believe that studying abroad was the only serious path for an ambitious student, and I argued it loudly. What changed my mind was a colleague who had turned down a scholarship in Canada to build a company at home. Watching her hire eleven people in three years, in a market she understood better than any newcomer could, made me realise I had confused leaving with progressing. Two arguments moved me: the opportunity she would have missed, and the fact that her advantage was local knowledge, which does not travel. I still think studying abroad suits many people. I no longer think it is the measure of ambition, and I am careful now about advising anyone to go.
Why this answer earns score 160
- Names the old belief, the trigger and the new belief clearly, which the prompt asks for directly.
- Explains what actually persuaded them, not just that they changed, showing genuine reflection.
- Ends with the practical consequence of the change, a natural and thoughtful close.
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