Essay plan: opinion (agree or disagree)
A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.
The question
Social media has changed the way young people communicate and form relationships. Is this a positive or negative development?
Your 4-paragraph plan
- Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
- Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
- Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
- Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.
The trap in this question type
Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.
Model answer for this question
Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.
Social media has rebuilt the way young people talk, flirt, argue and organise. Though the harms attract most headlines, I judge the overall development to be positive, with serious reservations that deserve action rather than panic.
The negatives are well documented. Platforms are engineered to reward comparison, and teenagers scrolling through filtered lives can mistake curation for reality, with measurable costs to self-esteem. Online cruelty follows children home in a way playground bullying never could, and hours lost to feeds are hours not spent reading, sleeping or meeting friends in person.
Yet the positives run deeper than critics allow. A shy student who struggles to speak in class may find her voice, and her community, online. Young people in different countries now share ideas, music and business opportunities directly, and social movements that improved real lives were organised in group chats. Long-distance friendship and family connection, once starved by cost, now survive on free video calls and constant small updates. For a generation likely to migrate for study or work, these tools keep relationships alive across oceans.
On balance, social media has expanded who young people can know, learn from and become, and those gains outweigh harms that better design and honest digital education can reduce. The task for parents, schools and platforms is not to take the tools away but to teach the discipline the tools demand.
Why this answer scores
- A 'positive or negative development' question is answered with a graded but firm verdict.
- Each body paragraph opens with a clear topic sentence, keeping Coherence and Cohesion high.
- Vocabulary is precise without showing off: 'mistake curation for reality', 'starved by cost'.