Do the advantages of taxing low-cost flights outweigh the disadvantages?
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The question
Several governments are considering higher taxes on low-cost flights in order to reduce the environmental damage caused by air travel. Do the advantages of such taxes outweigh the disadvantages? Support your view with reasons and examples.
Model answer
Taxing cheap flights is one of the few environmental policies that reaches ordinary consumers directly, which is why it provokes such strong reactions. Weighing both sides, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, provided the revenue is spent honestly.
The case against should not be dismissed. Low fares democratised travel: students, migrant workers and families divided by borders fly on prices that a heavy tax could put out of reach. Aviation also accounts for a relatively small share of global emissions, so a measure that trims flying at the margins may deliver modest environmental gains while imposing real social costs on the people least able to absorb them.
The case in favour is nonetheless stronger, for two reasons. Price is the one lever that reliably changes flying behaviour, because demand for leisure air travel is unusually sensitive to fare, and where short-haul prices have risen, passengers have moved to rail in significant numbers. Aviation emissions are also growing faster than almost any other source, in a sector with the fewest technical alternatives, so a tax buys time for those alternatives to mature.
The decisive question is what happens to the money. A tax that disappears into general revenue is simply a charge on mobility. A tax that funds rail electrification, night services and rebates for residents of islands and remote regions turns a penalty into a substitution.
In conclusion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages conditionally. Tax the flight, protect the traveller who has no alternative, and spend the proceeds on building that alternative.
Why this answer scores
- States the position in the opening paragraph and qualifies it, which Pearson's scoring rewards over a delayed opinion.
- Concedes a genuine cost to real people before answering it, so the essay reads as balanced rather than one sided.
- Sits inside the 200-300 word form band and closes with a specific policy rather than a restatement.
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