Should companies be required to publish all employee salaries?
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Why this answer earns score 90
- Clear position stated early and restated in the conclusion, with the essay structure Pearson's scoring expects.
- Concrete evidence (Norway, public sectors) and a concession paragraph show developed reasoning.
- 241 words, safely inside the mandatory 200-300 word form band.
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